“My favourite holiday” by Sayan Sparsh Nayak
When i woke up it was total mayhem in the house.Today we were on holiday to India to meet my cousins,but i felt a bit ominous because it is a 11 hour journey.We were all set to go , but we had to wait for taxi.
After sometime we reached Heathrow airport we were just about to reach the plane,but suddenly i remembered that I forgot to have lunch.For the last five an a halve ours i was famished and belligerent .When when reached i felt better i couldn’t wait to start going.
In India i enjoyed so much we went to the beach and went to watch a film i was all over the place met my grand parents , my cousins we all had a blast , Also enjoyed the street food in India. India has to be my best holiday EVER!!!!!!!!!!
you have some good vocab but you need to sort your spellings, punctuation and it doesn’t make sense.
very good entry!!! i like your short recount about your holiday amazing!!!! good high levelled adjectives
very good entry!!! i like your short recount about your holiday amazing!!!! good high levelled adjectives